Spreadsheets – Characters in a Nutshell (Part 2)

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Yep, it’s that time again….Spreadsheets!!!!!

Everybody excited yet?  I hope so.  This is one of my favorite subjects, so I can’t help but want everyone to love spreadsheets as much as me.  :)   Seriously, though.  Even if you’re not a spreadsheet lover, I hope you find something here you can use in your own character development even if it never makes it inside the cells of a spreadsheet!

This month I’ll build on what I talked about last time.  If you missed it or just need a refresher, check out my Character Requirements worksheet or last month’s post.  I use these two worksheets to develop my hero and heroine, and if I wrote suspense I’m sure I would use them for my villain too.  I complete as much as I possibly can before ever writing anything, because for me, I’ve learned that if I don’t fully see my characters before I start writing the story, I just make one big fat mess and end up having to start all over.  And I am not a fan of tossing things out and starting all over!

OK, let’s get started.  I’m going to touch on everything at a high level because there is seriously a lot of information at this stage and going into too much detail will make this post way too long.

Once I’ve figured out everything from the previous worksheet, what I do next is work on personality type, archetype, traits, strengths, flaws and GMC.  By the way, if you haven’t read Deb Dixon’s Goal, Motivation and Conflict, it’s one I highly recommend you find a copy of and read.  Understanding your characters are key to writing stories your readers can’t put down, and GMC is critical to this understanding.

So what I do is bring my character’s identity and essence over from the first worksheet.  This defines the Character Arc throughout the story.  How they will grow and change internally.  Along with the arc, I determine their Archetype.  I use the book Heroes & Heroines, Sixteen Master Archetypes, by Cowden. LaFever, and Viders to help me out here.  Sometimes my character is a combination of two archetypes, or sometimes they start out as one type and morph into another before the end of the book.  That just depends on each story and each character.

The next thing I do some of my friends find as total overkill but I happen to love.  :)   I define my character’s Myers-Briggs Personality Type.  I have a very handy book for this as well.  What Type Am I? Discover Who You Really Are, by Renee Baron.  It touches on the personalities in an easier to understand way than some of the more dense books I’ve seen on personality types.  For each section, say Extravert or Introvert, there are lists of statements that quickly help me figure out where my character fits.  Once I have their type defined, I type in the brief description (in the large box below personality type) found in the book.  Doing all this not only helps me to really learn what type of person my character is, but adding the description to my worksheet makes it easy to immerse myself back into my character’s head when everything else about the story begins to get too muddled in my mind.

Next…GMC.  What does the character want?  Why do they want it?  Why can’t they have it?  Thanks to several worksheets that have been shared with me in the past, along with multiple workshops I’ve taken, I’ve combined what worked of those into what works for me.  I’m assuming not all of this will work for everyone, so please, use what does and toss what doesn’t.

I break GMC down into External Goals: Big Goal, Story Goal, and the Internal Goal.  Then, I add another layer of Initial Goals and Ultimate Goals.  Initial vs. Ultimate helps to show not only how the character changes, but how the story does as well.

As you can see from the screen shots I’ve uploaded, the Big Goal is the character’s life ambition.  Sometimes this is the longing from the previous worksheet.  Not always, but quite often.  Additionally, throughout the course of the book, my character may find that what she thought she wanted out of life at the beginning of the story is not exactly what she wants by the end.  The character may or may not accomplish this goal within the pages of the book, but even if the initial event which set the story in motion never took place, the character would still have this Big Goal for their life.

Story Goal.  The Story Goal is the purpose of the book.  What goal initiates the action of the story?  Often this is how the character attempts to escape, retrieve, stop, or win in reaction to the event that has happened.  Again, the goal at the beginning of the story may be modified somewhat throughout the pages of the book and look differently before the story is over.

Internal Goal.  This one ties into the character arc and the character may not even be aware it exists.  It is, according to Michael Hauge, the embodiment of longing or need and the only way they can get it is to step out of identity and into essence.  Goal – What is the character’s subconscious need?  Motivation – Why do they need it?  Conflict – Why isn’t the Big Goal meeting this need?  It’s the tug-of-war between the essence and the identity.  And yes, it too may morph throughout the story so that what they need at the beginning may not be exactly what they need before the story ends.

One note about Initial vs Ultimate in all the goals.  I’m not always able to define this change.  Most times I do, but sometimes trying to see this clearly before the story is written ends up frustrating more than helping me.  Additionally, all of these things have been known to turn out to be something somewhat different by the time I finish my first draft, but I need this roadmap or I never get out of chapter one!

Next, Error in Thinking and Lesson the character must learn.  Take a look at what you defined as the character’s Belief in the first worksheet.  That would be the Error in Thinking.  And what the character has to learn concerning this belief, as they change throughout the story, is the Lesson to be learned.

The remaining items I either fill in from digging through the archetypes and personality books, or simply fill in pertinent background information which I might need help with keeping straight later.  Two key items on this last page are the Central Strength and Default Action for problems.  I spend some amount of time on these pieces of information because when my character is confronted with difficult situations, those are the things that need to consistently come through.  Also, though it’s not clear on the worksheet, I usually place an * by the biggest flaw so I make sure to show that throughout the book as well.

Alright!  So that’s it.  Like I said in the beginning, I fill out one of these for both main characters before I start writing, but then I also constantly modify them as the story unfolds and my characters show me they’re just a bit different than I first believed.

What do you do to figure out your characters?  Are you one of those people who completely discover them as you go along through the story or do you do something similar to me and chart them out before ever beginning?

Comments

Paula Graves says:

Wow, someone as anal about spreadsheets as I am! I have a ten sheet spreadsheet for preplanning, covering everything from character studies to romantic relationship development to GMCs for the hero, heroine and villain. Plus, I keep a spreadsheet to track my pages per day, set up to make sure I get my book done by deadline.

Even with my charts, the characters and story change over the course of writing it, but I like to have my spreadsheets done before I start writing.

Kim Law says:

I love finding people who GET the spreadsheets! :) And yes, I have more that go into the whole structure of the book too, but I don’t do one for daily pages. I tried that, but something about that actually stressed me. I do, however, have one for my yearly planning, done on a weekly basis. 52 little boxes all lined up across the page with all the things I need to accomplish this year listed down one side. It has lots of colors, some comments popped up throughout, and just makes me feel all warm and fuzzy :)

Paula Graves! OMG! Thanks for stopping by the RSS blog.

Elisa Beatty says:

This is so cool, Kim! I’m still having fun with last month’s spread sheet (and shared it with some of my playwriting/acting students).

I don’t think I could START imagining my characters this way (it’s very intuitive for me), but I think it would save me a lot of anguish along the way if I stopped partway through and explicitly figured some of these things out.

Thanks for sharing!!

Kim Law says:

Yay, Elisa! I’m glad you’re still enjoying the other one!

I can certainly see where this one is too crazy for some people to start out this way, it would just shut them down where I need it to get started. But I could definitely see how it could help keep you on track if you did it partway through. I get so turned around sometimes as I’m writing. Pulling this out and reading it zaps me right back on track.

Stephanie says:

From one scary anal person to another GREAT Job!!
I really enjoyed this. It is always interesting to me to see other people’s process. I can’t wait to tell my writing partner, J, about your system. Since she is a big ol’pantster she may not be as impressed as I am. :-)

Kim Law says:

Hey, Stephanie! Haha…yeah, I doubt she’ll be quite as impressed. She might force you never to show it to her again!

Kim, let me say I admire your worksheets, but it would totally freak me out to go this deep in the beginning. I do more of a reality check partway through the story and discover things about my characters because they don’t always reveal themselves to me until I’m deeper in their story. But the thing is when I go back to see where I need to layer in clues, I find they’re already there.

I do a more freeform GMC in the form of a first person journal. I also use a spreadsheet for the story arc which takes into consideration the character arcs as well.

Kim Law says:

You know, even with all this I still do the same as you sometimes. Something changes in the process of writing the story and I need to go back in and layer to match, and the details are already there. Weird how our brains work, isn’t it?

I get how it would freak you out to do this beforehand, though. I wish I could do less, but I’ve just accepted the fact this soothes me somehow and allows me to write instead of stress over what to write.

I do love how everybody works differently, though. I find that incredibly interesting.

Me too! I love getting to know my characters along the way. If I knew everything about them, everything that was going to happen, and how it would end, I’d never write the book. But I guess it’s not about me. It’s about the reader.

Liz Talley says:

I can’t believe you do all that. I’m so not organized. I guess I’m one of those organic writers or something. But I will say this. I think about my characters all the time, I analyze their actions/reactions, and I do a GMC worksheet. I do think you’ve got to know them very well to write their story. I guess I do this in my head, but nothing formal like you’ve got going on.

I’m always amazed when I see someone who has it down to this sort of science. Really, seeing your process was like reading science fiction – foreign, scary and remarkable :) Amazing.

Kim Law says:

Hahaha!!!! Science fiction! That’s hilarious.

This is a workshop. Thanks, Kim, for putting time into explaining this. I really love this sort of thing.

Kim Law says:

Yeah, I’ve been meaning to pitch this as a workshop to some conferences, just haven’t managed to get it all written up yet! I fully intended to for Nationals this year, but then the deadline was on me and I didn’t have an outline or anything done. It is on my yearly planning spreadsheet as something to do this year though :)

Pamela Cayne says:

Oh, Kim, you don’t know how wonderful and timely this post is. I’ve been using your Character Requirements spreadsheet (along with Mr. Hague’s timeline) and it’s helped me tremendously! I can’t wait to submit my characters to these new ones. Thank you!

Kim Law says:

Excellent! I’m thrilled you can use this!

Marilyn says:

I GET it; I just have trouble transferring it from theory to actual practice. I guess it just takes uh… practice, huh? ;-)

Kim Law says:

Haha! Yeah, practice helps. I think there are just so many little things to keep up with when writing, that not only does this help me sort through the mess, but it helps keep me straight on what’s what.

Oh, yay! The spreadsheets are back! I tend to have all this information thought out, but sometimes I lose patience with filling out the spreadsheets and I just keep it all in my head. Unfortunately, it’s a disorganized place in there, let me tell you! LOL. So I think I need to slow down and start taking the time to write it all down. It would keep me from wondering once I got to the middle of the book what the heck I decided my hero’s flaw was supposed to be. :)

Kim Law says:

LOL! That’s just like my head, Cynthia. Disorganized! I can just fake it with the spreadsheets :)

Jean Hovey says:

Well, well–discussed here by my very own writing partner and my good buddy. i am no longer a pantster. Starting today, I am a plotter. Stephanie, you bring those spread sheets on. I’m going out right now and buy me up a bunch of poster board and stuff to make–what is you make with poster board?

Seriously, it’s a good system. Pantster that I am, I do something similar. I just write it down in a notebook. I even know what kind of bread my characters like, though I don’t decide it; they tell me.

Jean

Kim Law says:

Hello there, Jean! Were your ears burning? Make sure you share whatever you end up making with that poster board :)

I used to try writing it all down in a notebook, but I would end up with bits and pieces all over the place. Plus, it wasn’t pretty that way! And I am impressed you know what kind of bread your characters like. That’s one I haven’t heard before!

Kim, I’m working on your character requirements worksheet from your previous post, and I’m having trouble understanding Longing. Can you give me an example of how a character’s Longing differs from Need, or maybe how Longing relates to the other elements of the sheet? Is the Longing a false need based on the character’s Fear?

Like, if a character was Wounded by her mother’s constant, berating disapproval of whatever she did, she might consequently Identify herself as “Not Good Enough.” If she’s so hung up on that self-identification that she fails to find happiness and success in her career or personal life, she might Believe that approval is necessary for success.

Would she Long for someone to approve of her? Is that too … subconscious?

Or would she Long for something more obvious and elusive, like a corner office or book deal or handsome husband and 2.5 kids?

Or would she Long to shuck her fears and believe in herself? The “not pursuing because it’s too frightening” implies that the Longing is a positive thing for the MC to want, but that doesn’t help me differentiate it from Need, unless the only difference is that one is expressed and understood by the MC, and the other is hidden from her by layers of Fears and Beliefs.

The “Need” is pretty clear in this case — she Needs to find the strength and courage to approve of herself, and quit relying on other people to tell her whether or not she’s good enough.

Don’t ask me about Essence. I don’t quite understand that one yet. I mean, I do in principle, but not in practice.

Kim Law says:

You’ve got it, Jamie. It’s a positive thing that is expressed, whereas the need may not even be known, it’s just there. Sort of like so many of us go through before we start writing. I wanted to write for years. Knew I would eventually get around to it. But I didn’t pursue it for a long time because if I pursued my biggest dream and failed, then I would have to give up on my dream.

Whereas if I had been berated all my life, someone telling me I’m not good enough, I might NEED to figure out my worth by myself before I have the guts to go for it. I might subconsciously believe that I’m not good enough to make it as a writer, but I still long to be a writer. Maybe I don’t go after it because I wonder if they had been right after all and I really am not good enough.

LONGING – be a published author
WOUND – every time I tried to go after a goal as a child, someone told me I’m a miserable failure and pushed me down, and I end up failing
BELIEF – I fail because I suck
FEAR – if I go after my dreams, I’ll confirm to myself that I really do suck and then I’ll be stuck without a dream of ever having anything better
IDENTITY – content, behind the scenes, non go-getter, keeping everything rolling without any acknowledgment from others
NEED – Find the strength and courage to approve of myself without other’s approval, stand up and show the world I’m worthy!
ESSENCE – not content to be behind the scenes doing worthless crap any longer, I want to shine, be somebody! I want to be me, a successful writer!

OK, so that got a little out of hand, but does that help? They know they have the longing, they just make a million excuses why they can’t go after it. Not good enough, others need me, the world doesn’t need another writer, etc. But they don’t even realize the need exists at the beginning of the book. It’s all the subconscious stuff that plays into the overall character arc.

Hoped that helped a little!

YES!

It did help, greatly.

Now let’s see if I can get through it and onto today’s charts…

Linda Warren says:

Kim,
I’m so impressed with your spreadsheets. I do a GMC on each character and their goals and personalities, flaws and strengths. I know who they are and what they want before I start writing, but a lot unfolds as I get to know them more.

If I was as organized as you, I might be able to write faster. LOL
Linda

Kim Law says:

Thanks, Linda! And yes, this helps me to write a bit faster. Otherwise I spend all my time trying to remember what I had planned to do and having to look back and forth to find it. That drives me crazy! Thanks for stopping by!

Diana Duval says:

Thanks for the worksheets. Like several others who have posted, I use spreadsheets after I’ve started. Spreadsheets are like maps to help me stay my course. Thanks for sharing some great information and charts.

Kim Law says:

Thanks, Diana. I hope you got a bit out of all my mess :)

Darynda Jones says:

I really like this, Kim! Thank you for posting them. I am learning as I go that, yes, I do have to step back and actually think about these things. What is the internal conflict, goal and motivation? What must the hero learn? If I do this in the initial setup (I’m a plotter) it saves me lots of time during the actual writing part. It’s like a map and helps keep me on track. LIke GPS using GMC. Hahaha.

Okay, not that funny.
Great post!!!
Sorry I’m so late. New puter and stuff…
~D~

Kim Law says:

Like GPS using GMC. Actually is pretty funny!! :D

Diana Layne says:

Kim, this is too cool. Thanks for sharing!

Kim Law says:

You’re welcome, Diana. Hope you find something useful!

Wow, Kim, this is some post! I usually know my characters well, but it’s more in my head. And sometimes they change and surprise me. Thanks!

Kim Law says:

I find that the more I write, the harder it is to keep everything straight in my head. I don’t know if it’s past characters trying to stay in there too or what, but I need this sort of thing to save me loads of time, both up front and trying to remember throughout.

Shea Berkley says:

You’re brilliant, Kim. I’m always amazed at the intricate layouts writers adopt to help their creativity. I wish I was as patient as you are. (sigh) Sadly, I’m not, and my shameless laziness keeps rearing its ugly head when confronted with such detailed work. One of these days I’ll grow up and be an organized writer. I hope.

Kim Law says:

Isn’t it interesting how one thing that helps a person’s creativity totally negates it in others? This scares some people so much they wouldn’t dream of filling this out beforehand, yet I can’t start without it. Very interesting.

And I doubt it’s patience you’re missing, maybe you just don’t need this kind of organization. Maybe your brain isn’t as messed up as mine :)

Tina Joyce says:

I missed commenting yesterday, but wanted to pop in to say how much I enjoyed seeing your process! I can already see things I can use to deepen my own characterization. Thanks!

Shoshana Brown says:

Yay–more spreadsheet fun! Can’t wait to try these out.

Wow! Thanks for this fantastic resource, Kim!

My characters reveal themselves to me when I’m in the middle of doing mundane tasks like washing the dishes. The conversations that go on without my prompting are quite revealing. Ugh, and now I sound like a total nutcase.

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