Collaging your Manuscript – to bring your characters and setting to life

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How well do you know your characters and setting when you begin writing a new manuscript? There are a number of wonderful charts that ask you in depth questions about your characters. You can even interview them or have them write journal entries to help you get into their psyches. These techniques are a great place to start if you work well with lists and charts.
But I had a hard time referring to the lists as I wrote. And although they did help me understand my characters, they didn’t help me visualize them in their settings. I wanted something I could glance at and instantly get a feel for the drama and the characters’ emotions as well as their time period and location. I’m a visual person and I needed something visual – something I could see that could throw me instantly back into my manuscript when I sat down at the computer (when my three-year-old didn’t notice that I wasn’t next to her coloring for a few minutes).

I attended a writing lecture on collaging blank books. A collage is a group of pictures or items glued to a surface to represent something, for us that something would be a scene or our entire book. It was fun and insightful, so I thought I’d give it a try. Now I make a collage at the beginning of each new manuscript and it helps me immensely.

I started off collaging blank books (I ordered some 8X8 inch books from www.createandtreasure.com). Blank books are fantastic to collage because you can create a different page for each part of your book – one page for each character with the setting in the background, a page for each major turning point, the black moment and the climax. Even if my plot changed along the way, the major points and the flavor tended to stay the same. The only drawback to this type of collage is that it can take some time depending on how detailed and pretty you make it. Below are a couple of examples from one of my collage books.

MAGICK_collage1 PROPHECY_collage1

Currently I collage a single poster board sheet for each of my books. Stephanie Bond, during her presentation at the 2009 RWA Conference recommended collaging a manila folder so that you can file it away when you’re finished. This is a great idea, but unfortunately I need a bigger surface.

So how do you start a collage? Well don’t spend hours poring over magazines trying to find the perfect fit to the characters in your head. You’ll probably never find them and you may just end up reading articles instead of writing. Below are my recommendations for creating a poster board collage. This works for me, but there aren’t really any wrong ways to collage (unless you spend all your time collaging and no time writing : ).
1. Think about the characters and setting. Perhaps you have a plot already sketched out (you don’t have to, but it helps).
2. Hunt for setting pictures on the internet and print them off.
3. Leaf through the picture folder of people and objects that you’ve been collecting from magazines. I tear them out whenever I happen upon a picture of something different or someone or a setting full of emotion. The current trilogy that I’m working on grew from a single picture from a magazine.
4. If there are specific objects (swords, keys, diamonds, etc) or animals in your book, print off pictures of them.
5. If you were casting your book as a movie (oh to be Stephanie Meyer!), are there specific actors who could take the roles? If so, print off their pictures, preferably dressed from a movie set in the time period or culture of your book.
6. If no person fits your character, then look for the emotions your character may exhibit or feel. One time I searched for a picture of anguish and I found an amazing abstract painting that totally captured the emotion for me. This painting pasted next to a model that had the basic hair and body type made me feel that I had found my hero.
7. Are there any semi-flat items you could use in your collage? I’ve used thread, cloth, charms, etc.
8. Once you have pictures and items, arrange them on the poster board. If you have background paper (scrap booking paper) that conveys an emotion or setting, you can place these under the pictures.
9. Start placing pictures on the left with your hero and heroine. As you move right, add in pictures of places and people who will turn up in the book. Overlap pictures when there are interactions. Play around with the pictures/items until they coalesce into the feel of your book. Once everything looks the way you want it, glue it down.
10. When you decide on hair color, eye color, scar location, tattoos, etc, write them in next to your characters or sketch them on the picture itself. I’m always forgetting my characters’ eye colors so it’s very helpful to just glance at my collage for the information. Write phrases or themes on the collage if they will help keep you on track.
Sometimes I’m so eager to start writing the book that I only get through the first few steps of the collage before I dive into writing. This is fine. But I still keep the pictures that I’ve found nearby in a folder to help me focus. And when I get stuck somewhere around the first turning point, I take some time to finish the collage. The process itself throws me back on track.

Having the collage helps when life distracts me. If you’re a visual person who also happens to fight distraction (darn kids have to eat : ), a collage next to you may help a lot. It has for me.

Below are two of my poster board collages. I would love to hear if you have ways to quickly re-immerse yourself into your manuscripts.  Sample Collage from Masquerade Sample Collage

Comments

Diana Layne says:

Wow, Heather, I have to say that because I am so NOT an artistic person (I barely passed the required art class in middle school and my teacher HATED me cuz she couldn’t teach me a thing!) that when I saw the blog title my eyes started glazing over. But reading this, you make it sound simple and fun. Maybe I can do it. I am a very visual person and I do get distracted easily, I can see that it might really help.

Diana, I can’t draw a stick figure, but collaging was one of the artistic things I enjoyed with my kids. There is no wrong answer in collaging. It’s all good.

Eden Glenn says:

Great. I haven’t done this. However, I did do a powerpoint with photos of my “cast” of current WIP. It helps me visualize the props, settings and characters in a pictorgram way.

My son (15) took the pictures and some key points of the book I gave him like a blurb and made a movie book trailer in Windows movie maker. Very cool! When I need a lift I watch my book trailer

Eden, how sweet of your son!

I’ve never before understood how a book trailer could be useful for an unpublished writer like me. I very often get disheartened by the suckiness of whatever I’m working on (especially in the editing stage). But being able to watch a dynamic short “movie” of my book would really uplift me and get me back into the hook of the story.

Elisa Beatty says:

I like the PowerPoint idea!! I’m on the computer all the time, and love to make visual presentations with picture files off the web. This would be a good alternative to collage for me (I don’t have many magazines around, and would probably have to hunt for an hour for glue.) Thanks, Eden!

Elise Hayes says:

I would never have the patience to do a collage at the start of a project–I’m always too eager to get into the story, because it’s wonderful and new and I’m excited about it.

But I love that you use collaging as a technique to keep you going after that first burst of writing–when you hit the mushiness that we often encounter in the middle of a book. I tend to be a really visual person, too, so I might try this the next time I hit the mushy middle of a new project…

I also have a hard time stopping to collage at the very beginning because I’m so wrapped up in the fresh ideas, etc. So sometimes I start collaging before I finish my last manuscript. It gears me up for the start of the next one while I’m finishing the first.

One of my chapter mates did a presentation on collaging. I’m like Elise, I want to start writing. But I have leafed through the Autotrader to find the right car for my characters (because I think a car says so much about a person). I’ve drawn out the floorplan of a house so it stayed consistant. Of course, I write contemporary – not much world building.

I sketch out floorplans, too, when my characters stay in one place for long enough.

My current unfinished POS features a possibly haunted house with plenty of secrets. I’ve been tempted to draw the floorplans using home architectural software, but I figure it’ll take more time than it’s worth. The particular architectural package I own isn’t very friendly to casual users, and I tend to get infuriated by my inability to be immediately fluent in new software. The package cost too much money for me to just buy new, easier-to-use stuff, so I’m pretty much stuck with this or nothing until our computer platform is no longer compatible with it.

Elisa Beatty says:

Love the haunted house idea, Jamie!!

Thanks, but it’s just a Jane Eyre rip-off at this point!

Pamela Cayne says:

Color me another one who does PowerPoint and makes book trailers for my collages. I found that with my previous paper-on-posterboard ones, I was missing something. Now I can add music, flashes of dialogue, have characters physically move towards and away from each other, and so on. It’s really worked for me, and now to get back in my book, I just watch a 1-4 minute trailer/presentation of my story and I’ve picked it up again.

Elisa Beatty says:

Ooh…adding music–great idea! And love the other ideas!

Wow – I wish I was that techno savvy : ) That sounds wonderful for the senses. If you give a workshop on how to put a trailer together, I’ll sign up for it!

Addison Fox says:

Heather:

This is incredible. What a neat way to bring to life what you see in your head as you prepare to write.

I said it earlier this week, but yet again, I am SO awed and fascinated by everyone’s processes. It’s so neat to see you everyone gets to the words, THE END!!! :-)

Addison

Addison Fox says:

Um….bad typing….that would be “It’s so neat to see HOW everyone gets to the words, THE END!!”

Somewhere around page 150 or 200 I start to wonder how the heck I’m going to get to THE END. Some days it feels like I just have to keep typing forward one word at a time. Going back to my visuals and music help.

I keep meaning to do this! It looks like such a great creativity booster. Do you do it before or while you write?

I use http://www.polyvore.com/ to create small digital collages. I tend to make one for each character, with a picture of the celebrity “model” that best fits the character along with whatever clothes/bags/shoes/accessories they’d wear. I try not to get too obsessive about it, though. It’s all too easy to get lost in the collaging project and forget about the purpose — to help you write the book!

At least with real, physical elements, you get to be decisive. Rubber cement isn’t very forgiving on magazine paper!

Thanks for opening up about your method, Heather.

Heather, thanks for sharing your collages with us! I’m usually just a sit down and start writing the story type of girl, but when I started my current WIP I did decide to try some more visual inspiration. I gathered some pictures of character and settings from the internet and put them in my Liquid Story Binder program.

It helped me get the feel for the book, but sometimes I’m lazy (LOL) and don’t want to have yet another window open on the computer. I like the idea of doing a posterboard collage, though! I’ll have to try that.

Elisa Beatty says:

What’s Liquid Story Binder?? Sounds cool.

Being a creative person, this sounds like something I would enjoy doing, Heather. However, I have a feeling I would like the art project so much, it would end up being more of an act of procrastination and an alternative outlet to experience my story rather than actually writing it.

Yes, Laurie, sometimes I have to make myself stop and write : ) But usually I can finish the collage fairly quickly if I consciously decide not to make it TOO pretty (which is hard for us creative people to do, I know : ).

Beth Langston says:

I use youtube / music videos to re-immerse myself in a manuscript, especially for emotional scenes.

Here are some of my favorites:

Someone is dying: “Tears in Heaven” by Eric Clapton

Lovers miss each other: “Right Here Waiting” by Richard Marx

Lovers are saying goodbye forever: “I Will Always Love You” by Whitney Houston/Dolly Parton

Bullied teenager triumphs: “Extraordinary Pantene Commercial” (love this!)

Falling in love with your friend: “How Did I Fall” by Backstreet Boys

And last, Talented=Hot : “100 Years” by Five for Fighting

(For me, any guy playing the piano is hot. I’m just saying…)

Beth

Wow – music videos! I hadn’t thought of that, but that merges music and visual drama – great idea!

I love the music aspect. I wish we could have a soundtrack with our books (I guess that would be a movie). I was writing with the satelite radio on today and it was affecting my writing. I’m not sure if it was for the better.

Keri Diacumakos says:

Love the idea and love you!

Tamara Hogan says:

I subscribe to a lot of magazines, and I frequently tear out pages that have intriguing looking people or rooms or landscapes. Right now I’m just shoving these pictures into a file. Trying this approach would give me a way to make these pictures visible. Nice work, and great idea!

-tammy

With that file you’ve done a lot of the work already. Just pick out those that fit, find a couple missing ones on google images and paste them down. I set my poster board up next to my computer so I can glance over at it whenever I need it.

Kim Law says:

I think collages are great…however I absolutely can not do them. I just can’t. I feel like I spend the entire time stressing over making it “pretty” (and I’m not the type who can make it pretty), and because of this stress, my creativity is shut down and I get nothing out of it. I’ve been thinking about trying it again, however, as I really believe that if I could get beyond my issues, it could free my mind to be creative and fill in some holes.

I do often scour the internet and save off pictures that remind me of my characters, location, etc. I just store these all in a folder on my computer and bring them up randomly. Now if I had a program that would allow me to collage them on the computer…hmmm….that might work for me. Maybe then I wouldn’t feel the need to pretty it up like I do with poster boards.

I love collage!!! I do one for each of my books in the planning stages (I’m a plotter). This gives me a visual focus and a reminder of what i want my characters to look like, plus any important items, locations, etc., that I want kept at the front of my mind. Currently, I combine my collages with a plotting chart on those big cardboard presentation boards. Not as portable, but easy to see. I need lots of space, so mine won’t fit on a book or single piece of paper. Here are some examples of mine from a website article I did:

http://www.writingplayground.com/articlearchive08.html#postits

Sometimes they are more elaborate, sometimes simpler, but I always enjoy them. I simply google my characters (once I know who I am modelling them after) and print off the pictures I want. Add words, names, pictures of houses, other items, etc. and simply arrange them where I want. And the background can’t be white. I have to cover it in some other color that speaks to me about the book (don’t ask me why, I’m just crazy that way, and white is boring). :)

Darynda Jones says:

This is awesome, Heather! I love collages and yours are great.I just tore a page out of an Avon catalog, you know…for insipiration. I would love to try collaging.

Thanks!
~D~

Ooooo, Avon . . . that made me think of something. If you like a certain fragrance in a magazine, you could use that in your collage too if it reminds you of one of your characters.

OH, that is so true. What a nice touch that would be!

rita says:

This is great! and the music video thing- WOW ! never thought of it. Also do the magazine thing. I see someone I like and the page gets put in a file.

Your collages are beautiful. Thanks for sharing, Heather. We had a workshop through our local chapter and now I have my own racetrack and barn setting. I use it for all my books, helps me get the feel when I don’t have time to run out and “smell” the horses in the yard.

Heather, This is me! I search magazines, catalogs, etc before recycling and place all the pictures in a file. Then when starting a new story, I spend an afternoon and place the pictures on a small bullentin board. The story line plays out right there. It’s great to have the visual handy.

Your collages are awesome. Now I can’t wait to start posting pictures for my next story.

Joan Swan says:

You all are amazing! Power Point? Movie trailers? WOW!

I love collaging, but then I majored in design. I always collage at a point where I’m stuck in the story. It’s an awesome way to get unstuck.

I often steal, borrow, beg magazines from work or friends or family and just leaf through them, pulling out anything that looks interesting — not related to any particular manuscript. Especially people — lots and lots of people, because I LOVE having a photo of them to help me describe when I’m writing.

Then, when I get ready to collage, I’ve got a mountain of things to look through until I’ve found the perfect fit and I’m wasting time searching through the magazines because I’ve already pulled the best stuff.

Something new for me is Liquid Story Binder. It’s a writing software that allows you to have multiple windows open as you’re writing, so I always have photos of people and/or places open while I’m delving into my chapters. I love it.

Great topic. Great responses.

Shea Berkley says:

All I can say is wow! I’ve never done anything like that before. I can see why you’d do it, but how do you stop? It looks so fun.

Dara says:

Oh my goodness, I have to do this!

I’ve done a mock book trailer for my WiP–I found it really helped me get into the story. I think I’m going to try this too!

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